《飞鸟集》新译（一）

Stray birds of summer come to my window to sing and fly away.And yellow leaves of autumn,which have no songs,flutter and fall there with a sigh.

                                                                      夏日飘曳的鸟停留在我窗前

                                                                      歌唱着飞来又飞走

                                                                      寂秋昏黄落落

                                                                      微叹一声风过

        自读过北岛先生的《时间的玫瑰》后，我对翻译的东西就有一种近似洁癖的注意。泰戈尔的诗我断断续续读过，很喜欢！也许是平日里多作短诗，所以对《飞鸟集》格外注意。最近读陆晋德先生译本，大体很好，但总有一些不舒服，尤其是他为每首诗做的解读，我觉得诗的问题应尽量放到诗中去解决，读者是否理解与其阅读能力和译者的翻译能力有关，最好不要去找旁的形式代替或分担对诗的审美。我的英语很不好，但想一想也许可以通过翻译来更真切的理解原诗的美，别人的译稿已成了或近或远的弯路。不足之处烦劳各位观者劳神指正！

（陆晋德版）：

                                                                        夏日漂泊的鸟

                                                                        飞到我窗前唱歌

                                                                        又飞走了

                                                                        秋天的黄叶

                                                                        它无歌可唱

                                                                        抖动着坠落

                                                                         触地一声叹息

                                                                                                                                   2010.12.01